Tim L.

Hm. First off, I do proofread, and this is the fourth time I have re-written and re-worked this poem; my average count is seven. Aged the way I have used ...

The Human Invention as seen through the Eyes of Fuck Aged eight-teen, oozing with vocabulary, yet it remains my most enduring friend. A dominatrix among the rest, but that only ...

Also, after people told you to consider their criticisms, you replied by saying you are proud of your poem's "success"... You are on a website that is meant for new ...

I just have a question. The poem wasn't terrible, it wasn't great, either, as many people have said. I could sit here and tell you what to do with it ...

pettybage, Thank you for the review. You did make a lot of good points, especially dropping the almost before stables...English is, after all, a Germanic language, a language of force. ...

Alrighty. Let's get reviewin'. What we have here is a great idea, well-written on the whole with a few scattered errors. Now, as this is the most foreboding error, some ...

Okay, so I don't know what went wrong with some of the reviews here... First off, I enjoyed the piece. You can tell that you're comfortable writing from a different ...

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There are moments in this “puddle-wonderful” life where the sheets of expectation ripple into themselves and expose the undaintified slumberer whom we all felt but had never seen. In these ...

Life begins with no sight, no recollection of things past. Eyes open, and in slips Colors! Beauty! Textures! (Along with the covert flimsiness of each) For the most part, one ...

Esther, Thank you for the review! I know the main character is not the most likeable guy at this point, but the anti-hero complex has always been my favorite, and ...

I enjoyed the thinking behind this piece, but what we have here is a pretty common scenario: Great creative thinking, interesting plot, but needs more attention to craft and structure. ...

Prologue I used to have a name. Back before any of this bullshit happened, I was Randall Blaine, just a normal fuckin’ kid doing normal fuckin’ shit. I’d drive around ...

The title is a reference to Megan's Law, which is a law requiring sex offenders to register for their crimes, have signs put in front of their houses saying what ...

"Another day, another plate of this sh*tty government food, and another insult thrown at me by one of the inmates; apparently even murderers and thieves have standards. These fools are ...